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yesterday was my older brother birthday and
>yesterday was my older brother's birthday and
today is he's graduate of university
>today is he's graduation day in the university.
so i bought him a shoes
>so I bought him shoes as a present.
I don't know if he love it
>I don't know if he will love it.
i think he love it because he needs it
>I think he will love it because he needs it.
by the way it was very expensive... it was 70box oh my god~
>The shoes that I bought for him was very expensive.It cost me 70 dollars
but if he love it , i don't care
>but i don't care, I hope he will love it.^^
Thank you for edit my diary <--is that right ?? :)
Is it right?thank you for editing it.
Philip, always remember that english writing and speaking is a bit different because when it comes to speaking you can use some words that we cannot use when it comes to writing. for example is 70 bucks= we usually say when we are going to write it down is 70 dollars.have a nice day.keep it up. |
