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One of our colleagues quit suddenly in this morning.
> One of our colleagues suddenly quit this morning.
He joined us just about 2 months ago.
> VERY GOOD
He had a career as a cosmetics formulator (developer or researcher) for several years.
> VERY GOOD
My manager hired him for his career.
> My manager hired him for his experience and skills.
> My manager hired him for this reason.
During our business trip in Bangkok last week, he made a trouble related to manufacturing.
> PERFECT
He and our manufacturing department should produce one tailor-made product, but because of his mistakes and lack of thorough preparation, they couldn’t meet the order.
> PERFECT
My manager and president got angry so much.
> My manager and our president got very angry.
Of course, just mistakes can be modified and improved.
> Of course, mistakes can just be modified and improved.
However, his career and skill were insufficient for my manager’s expectation.
> VERY GOOD
The biggest problem was that he didn’t realize what his actions were wrong.
> VERY GOOD .................................. didn't realize that his actions were wrong.
Finally, they let him quit.
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