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It was our 2nd wedding anniversary today.
> It's our 2nd wedding anniversary today.
Though it was Monday, we were able to be together the entire day.
> Though it's Monday, we were able to be together the entire day.
For celebrating the day, we decided to have a dinner in a luxurious restaurant in my town.
> PERFECT
The restaurant is in a big hotel and it took about 20 minutes by walk from my house.
> VERY GOOD .................................... it took about 20 minutes by foot from my house.
> ............................................................. it's a 20-minute walk from my house.
We went to a big park near the hotel and took a walk.
> VERY GOOD
However, the weather got too far colder in the morning.
> VERY GOOD
The temperature dropped by more than 10 degrees.
> PERFECT
There were only a few of people in the park.
> VERY GOOD
Due to the terrible cold weather, we went into a shopping mall near the hotel to wait for the opening time of the restaurant.
> VERY GOOD
Though the dishes were generally pretty good but not every dishes were delicious. Anyway, we enjoyed our anniversary.
> VERY GOOD! ........... remove "Though" at the beginning of the sentence to make it perfect. :-) |
