Hello Ahra!
Thank you for showing me the picture of your Christmas tree. It's so cute and unique! Your daughter must have loved it.
Here are your corrections:
this is my christmas tree.
>> GOOD!
*Christmas
I wanted to say "I sing for you(my students) the song "heal the world."
>> I wanted to say "I'm going to sing the song "Heal The World" for you."
and I will sing the song "heal the world." in my exam.
>> And then I will sing that song during my interview.
thank you for your attention!
>> GOOD!
you are a very very very good teacher!
>> GOOD!
OR >> You are a very good teacher.
OR >> You are a really good teacher.
bye!
>> GOOD!
Ciao!
~Teacher Irick~
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