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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   youhee113    µî·ÏÀÏ   2015-01-05
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We went to Cambodia and Vietnam.

>> CORRECT

It was so hot, but it was good.

>> CORRECT

However, all of our family was sick.

BETTER>> However, all of my family members were sick.

So It was very hard travel.

>> So, it was very hard to travel.

T. Marie ^^,

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