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- Before we get into that story ~~ >>> Before we get to that story...
let's talk about something else - >>> Correct!
Before we talk about that subject, ~~ let me tell you something - >>> Correct!
A boy asked why we stay here if there is oasis just over the hill? >>> A boy asked why we are staying here when there is an oasis just over the hill.
A camel driver replied this is a time to go to bed. >>> A camel driver replied, "This is a time to go to bed."
- I prefer nonfiction to fiction - >>> I prefer nonfiction over fiction.
I am not that interested in the fiction but if it was well organized and resonated the real life, that would be fine. >>> I am not that interested in fiction; but if it was well organized and resonates the real life, that would be fine.
- You should try the Greek Zorba, a story about a man whose name is Zorba >>> Correct!
And the writer wrote this story because he admired the sprit of Zorba.>>> Correct!
Zorba was man the writer met when he was agonizing the meaning of life, seeking the truth of life and Zorba was a man who demonstrated the high level of mentality in real life. >>> Zorba was a man the writer met when he was agonizing over the meaning of life. He was seeking for the truth of life. Zorba was a man who demonstrated a different perception of life. |
