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Though the New Year just had begun, Korean people had several sad and miserable news.
> The new year started with several sad and miserable news greeting the Korean people.
We heard some of murder cases, fire disasters of an old apartment and an old market street and even an accident of violence about a teacher of a kindergarten.
> We heard of some murder cases, fire disasters or an old apartment and an old market street and even an incident of violence commited by a kindergarten teacher.
These tragic crimes occurred just within the first two weeks of the New Year.
> PERFECT
As days go by, more incomprehensible accidents, crimes and affairs occur with incomprehensible reasons.
> V ERY GOOD!
More angry and sadder thing is that the government couldn’t make the fundamental solution.
> The more frustrating and sadder thing is that..................................
- VERY GOOD ON THE USE OF "fundamental solution"!
They just made some laws or regulations only for patching up the problems.
> PERFECT!
However, we the public also should change ourselves.
> VERY GOOD!
A good society can’t be achieved only with one, but everyone.
> A good society can't be achieved by only one but by everyone.
You have made a very good point in this article, Sir. Good job in expressing your thoughts. :-)
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