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I invited some of my friends to my house to enjoy drinking.
> PERFECT
Since my marital house is quite far from my hometown (Seoul), we hardly have a chance to meet each other since I got married.
> VERY GOOD, ( although there is really no need to say "marital" house............ you can just simple say "house"............. everything else.
Furthermore, I have been having my sick leave at home so I had been occasionally missing my friends.
> VERY GOOD ........ been spending my sick leave at home so .............................
In the end, two of my old friends decided to visit my house on this Sunday.
> Eventually, two of my old friends decided to visit my house this Sunday.
It was a very cloudy of all the weather on the day.
> It was a very cloudy weather of all days that day.
They arrived at our town late in the afternoon.
> PERFECT
We hurried to buy some dishes for dinner and drinking.
> PERFECT
We bought one dish of sashimi, steamed pork and fried chicken.
> VERY GOOD
We were very glad to get together after a long time.
> PERFECT
We talked about our current lives, work and some events in the past.
> PERFECT
Sadly, they should go back home early since they have to go to work in the next morning.
> Sadly, they had to go back home early since they have to go to work the next morning. |
