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Hi G.D.!
It's nice to hear that you still have time for your family. Eventhough it's a busy weekend for you. I know your father and aunt-in-law is very happy because you celebrated their special day with them. Here are some corrections to make your composition better.
>>> I had a quite busy weekend since we had two family events. The first one was my aunt-in-law’s 60th birthday party last Saturday. In the morning of Saturday, we first went to a hospital to get a medical check-up. Since the party was supposed to be held in the evening, we spent the daytime to do some household chores. On the way to the venue, we stopped by a new shopping mall to look around there for a while. We finally arrived at the party and had a dinner with her and some of her close relatives including my in-laws. The following day, it was my father’s birthday party. We took a rest at home in the morning and visited my parents’ house in the afternoon. My mother prepared all of the dishes by herself and we enjoyed our dinner together. It was a busy weekend for us. |
