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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   gdragon82    µî·ÏÀÏ   2015-04-14
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Good day G.D.!

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I made another appointment with one of my high school friends last Saturday evening. Since we live far from each other, we chose an old downtown of Seoul for our  venue. It took me  about an hour by bus from my town. We went to a special pub. The pub is managed by one of the two biggest Korean traditional alcoholic beverage companies. The pub has their own brewery.So, their liquors are fresher and delicious than the other normal pub or restaurant. We talked about our lives, work, families and his plan to get married. He is going to get married this July. We really enjoyed our Saturday night with the delicious drinks.

   ÀÌÀü±Û Meeting my friend
   ´ÙÀ½±Û I had a shopping