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The weather in the latest in Korea is terrible.
>>The weather in Korea is terrible.
It has been not only very hot but also humid. OK
The sky is also hazy and cloudy.
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Due to the high humidity, discomfort index is also very high.
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So, I always turn on an air-conditioner at my home and office.
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Incidentally, it is a summer vacation season in Korea.
>>Incidentally,It is the start of summer vacation in Korea.
A lot of companies and students have the vacation during that period and this week is a peak.
>>A lot of companies and students have their vacation during that period and this week is a peak season.
Most of the highways from downtown to rural area have a terrible traffic jam.
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Most of our clients and my colleagues are also having their vacation.
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So, I’m not so busy and the atmosphere in the office is a little loose.
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Anyway, I hope the terrible hot weather would be over soon.
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