It was my wife’s birthday today.
>>Today is my wife's birthday.
So, I bought a small birthday cake for her.
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In the midnight of the day, the moment of changing the date to August 9th, we had a simple birthday party with the birthday cake.
>>The date changes at midnight,so we had a simple birthday party with a cake.
I celebrated her singing a birthday song while playing a ukulele.
>>I played a Ukalele while singing a birthday song for her.
She blew out the candles on the cake and cut it.
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However, we didn’t taste it since it was too late night to eat such the high-calorie food.
>>However, we didn’t taste it since it was too late night to eat such a high-calorie food.
In the afternoon, we visited my parents-in-law’s house to enjoy the birthday lunch.
>>In the afternoon, we had a nice birthday lunch with my parents-in-law.
My mother-in-law prepared for several dishes like sea mustard soup, spicy stir-fried pork, fish pancakes and several vegetables and Kimchi.
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We really enjoyed the birthday party with the delicious dishes.
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