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On Saturday, we woke up very early to go to a big mountain to enjoy playing a valley.
>>On Saturday, we woke up very early to go to a big mountain to enjoy playing on the valley.
It is a big national park and located quite far from my town.
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Since we started early in the morning, we didn’t have a traffic jam.
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>>Since we started to leave early in the morning, we didn't experience any traffic jam.
I looked forward to swim in the valley water, but we couldn’t enjoy that much because the water was too cold, though the weather was still very hot.
>>I'm looking forward to swim in the valley water, but we couldn’t enjoy that much because the water was too cold, though the weather was still very hot.
After that, we ate lunch in a small city near the mountain.
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Next day, we stayed at home for almost all of the day while doing some house chores like cleaning and laundry.
>>Next day, we stayed at home for almost all day long while doing some household chores like cleaning and doing the laundry.
We went to a special buffet restaurant which serves a lot of kinds of Korean traditional and fusion dishes.
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We were very happy to enjoy several delicious herbs, vegetables and meat cuisines.
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