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Hi GD!
Belated happy wedding anniversary to you and your wife! May you have a lot more blissful years ahead together! ^^ Kindly go over the revisions below:
It was the 1,000th day since we got married, so we made a plan to celebrate our anniversary.
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It was visiting Garosu-gil in Seoul.
>>> We decided to visit Garosu-gil in Seoul.
Garosu-gil is located in Shinsa Station near Gangnam and it is one of the hottest Streets in Seoul.
>>> Garosu-gil is located in Shinsa Station near Gangnam and it is one of the trendiest streets in Seoul.
There are a lot of new and trendy restaurants, clothing shops, cosmetics shops, coffee shops, etc.
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There are a lot of people and most of them are young people.
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Some of their clothes are very fancy and cool.
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The street is very sensitive for the latest trends.
>>> The street is very famous for the latest trends.
So, a lot of companies want to open their premier shops there and get sales data and trend information from there.
>>> That's why a lot of companies want to open their premier shops there and get sales data and trend information there.
We ate some Mexican foods for lunch and looked around the street.
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We had window-shopping at some clothing stores and beauty shops.
>>> We went window-shopping at some clothing stores and beauty shops.
We enjoyed our Seoul trip.
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