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The name of my town is Songdo and they are now holding a festival about world culture.
>>> The name of my town is Songdo and there's an ongoing festival about world culture.
So, its title is “2015 Songdo world culture festival”.
>>> It's known as “2015 Songdo World Culture Festival”.
Actually, the original name of it was “Songdo world beer festival”, but it had been changed this year.
>>> Actually, its original name was “Songdo World Beer Festival”, but it had been changed this year.
However, people still regard it as a beer festival than world culture festival.
>>> Correct Sentence!
Though the title of the festival is quite big, I think that the contents are not as well as its title.
>>> Though the title of the festival is quite general, I think that the programme does not live up to the title.
It is hold in a large unpaved ground and there is a stage for performance like singing and dancing in the front of the ground.
>>> It is held in a large unpaved ground and there is a stage for performances like singing and dancing in the foreground.
There are kiosks serving beer and food.
So, visitors buy them, move to the table in the ground and then enjoy them while enjoying the performance of the stage.
>>> After buying, the visitors buy them, would move to the table in the ground and then enjoy them while watching the performance of the onstage.
Anyhow, we had somehow good time with the festival. |
