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Hello Elin!
I hope you will really survive!
Good luck to you!
hehehe
-teacher jha
CORRECTION:
Title:If you had to go to a deserted island,what
three items would you bring?
>>>If you have to go to a deserted island, what are the
three items would you bring?
I'll bring a bottle of water, a camera and a cell phone.
>>>=)
We can't live
without water.
>>>=)
But ina deserted island,it is so difficult to find
water.
>>>But in a deserted island, it is so difficult to find
water.
So I'll bering a bottle of water.
>>>So I'll bring a bottle of water.
It is very unique experience to
go to a deserted island.
>>>It is a very unique experience to
go to a deserted island.
I want to tell about my experience when I escape
from that island.
>>>I want to say something about my experience if I escaped
the deserted island.
If I take some photo of the island,people can
understand more easily what I experienced.
>>>If I take some photos from the island, people can
understand easier what I have experienced.
That is my reason to bring a
camera, And when I experienced that deserted island,I have to escape
from there.
>>>That is my reason why I'll bring a
camera.
And when I experienced that deserted island,I have to escape
from there.
>>> And when I experienced that in the deserted island, I have to escape.
I'll bring a cell phone or wireless phone and call the
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| >>>I'll bring a cell phone or a wireless phone and call for a
rescue. |
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