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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   chris    µî·ÏÀÏ   2009-09-25
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Hello Chris!

Thanks for the message!

I really do appreciate it^^

Is baseball your kind of sports?

 

I like sports too, a lot.

Like volleyball the most.

 

I'll see you later then^^

---Teacher Khristine^^

 

>>>>Here are some grammar corrections:

Dear Teacher Khristine,

 

Hi,teacher.I`m Chris.

=Hi teacher! I'm Chris.


Today lesson was fun.

=Today's lesson was fun.


How are you? I`m fine.

=How are you? If you would ask me, i'm doing fine.


I think baseball was hard game.But it is fun.

=I think basebal is a hard game, but it is fun.


Do you likes sports?
See you later.

Teacher Khristine

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