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Hello Kate,
I was surprised to see your diary, but at the same time very happy.
Your view on the issue is very good.I agree, that Obama made an impact through his speeches about international issues.
I also hope that Obama will live up to his promises about peace in the Muslim world.
I had a great time conversing with you.You're mature and open- minded about things.
When we were having our discussion,I noticed that you are a fast thinker and doesn't
hesitate to express your opinion.Keep it up and I'm sure in time, you will be very fluent
in speaking in English....
I want you to enjoy learning.Don't take English as just a way to a good future, but also because
you enjoy it and has fun doing it.
I think I said a lot already...ha ha ha
Thank you also and take care always!!!
<<<<T.Minnie>>>>
Here are corrections to your diary:
There are a lot of criticisms about obama received Nobel peace prize.
(Be careful with your verb and punctuation marks))
>There are a lot of criticisms about Obama receiving the Nobel prize,
but I think President Obama strengthened international diplomacy.
and he made a new atmosphere to international politics.
(you can turn this into one sentence)
>but I think President Obama strengthened international diplomacy and made a new atmosphere to international politics.
Although he doesn't conclude any certain outcome,
He will endeavor in the future for international peaces.
(again punctuation marks and capitalization of letters)
>Although he doesn't conclude any certain outcome, he will endeavor for international peace in the future.
Force should be reported to his activity more,
(I don't know if we have the same thought on this, but please check my correction)
>I think he needs to give more push to his intentions.
I think Nobel committees send a encouragement message
because they want to make up more force for obama's activity.
(be careful with your articles)
>I think Nobel committee sent a message of encouragement
because they want to strengthen Obama's policies.
thank you mini.( thank you too...I enjoyed it...)
it was a good conversation. |
