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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   raina    µî·ÏÀÏ   2009-10-22
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Hello Raina!

I think the story is a classic family movie

and what i'm happy about was your last sentence "My mom and dad lives in the same house"

I hope that you learn a lot about that movie.

The greatest value that i've learned is about keeping family ties

Thanks for the story sweetie it was very nice of you to type it^^

Lovely dreams for a sweet girl like you^^

 

>>>Here is your story and the following corrections

 

I read a book whose title was "Parents Trap" .
The story was about twins.
The story starts with their mom and dad being married.

 They had  twins as a result  but then they got divorced.
The other one is living  with mom and the other is living in dad's house.
One day,live in dad's house kid is go to a camp.
Her name is Hally.
In the camp, Hallie saw a kid who has the same face as her. Her name was Annie.
They birthday is on the 10th month and they  11th!


The one is only got a mom and one is only got a dad.

=Hallie with her dad and Annie with her mom.


They are twins!!!! and they were change!

=They were twins and they switched places to find out who their parents are


and they were happy.

=in the end they were happy


Mom and Dad is living in the same house.

 

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Hello Ma'am!

Thank you for the best wishes^^

There is actually what we call as a saturday program and it is a one hour class.

If you want to know more about it, just give the manager a call.

Thank you once again and 'til next time^^

 

Teacher Khristine

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