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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   feel1627    µî·ÏÀÏ   2009-11-30
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Hello Lim!
Hope you'll have a n interesting day today!

here's the correction:

 

when i send e-mail to my friend. i'm afraid of writting wrong. so i'll ask about that.

>>>when I send emails to my friend, I'm afraid of wrting in a wrong way, so I'll ask you about that.

 

Yesterday I got a virus  when I checked my note from juile on facebook. So I had to write words in english every 5 minutes. Do u understand?/

 

Though when I'm swimming I usually drink water, i like that./

 

I also have an exprience that male students caught me and dropped me into the swimming pool during the students farewell party

 

I know~ what kind of figure does ship have/you have to take a picture!!!!

 

Most interviewers don't like different pictures compared to the real you.

 

 

That's it!
Hope to hear from you tomorrow!
Take care!

   ÀÌÀü±Û Storm
   ´ÙÀ½±Û 11-30-09