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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   delty107    µî·ÏÀÏ   2009-09-04
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Hello Yosef^^

Here is your diary^^

Today I wake up early at 6 O'clock and I went tennis court with

young brother an exercise!!

I came back home with brother after 8O'clock execise!!

I need to study in the morning but I'm tried because wake up early.

so I slept at two hours and i had study english video lecture about

grammer and pronunciation

 

Here are the corrections^^

Today I wake up early at 6 O'clock and I went tennis court with
young brother an exercise!!
=Today I woke up at 6 o'clock am and I went to the tennis court with my brother and

we played tennis

I came back home with brother after 8O'clock execise!!

=I came back home with my brother after 8 o'clock

I need to study in the morning but I'm tried because wake up early.

=I need to study in the morning but i'm tired because of waking up early in the morning.

so I slept at two hours and i had study english video lecture about

grammer and pronunciation

 =So I slept for two hours and I studied an English video lecture about grammar and pronunciation.

 

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