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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   delty107    µî·ÏÀÏ   2009-09-05
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Hello Yosef!

Here is your diary and the following corrections;

 

Today I woke up a little late but I went the tennis execise
with young brother.
=Today, I woke up a little late but I still went out for a tennis exercise with my younger brother.


orginally we had to execise begining 6 O'clock

=Originally, we had to exercise at 6 o'clock in the morning

so we wents near home courts. we execised until 8O' clock
=So we went at the court near our home and we exercised until 8 o'clock am.


we cames back home. I'm strange very tried finally slept too
=We came back home. It's strange that I feel tired, so I slept too.


I did'n studied in the morning. my condition is not good all day.
=I didn't study in the morning because my condition was not good all day long.


I did loaf around all day long I feel so no good

=I did loaf around all day long, but still I didn't feel good

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