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During the holiday, i went to the Busan. >>I went to Busan during the holiday.
I met the members who stay together on every new year's day. >>I met our family members/relatives who usually stay with us every New Year's day.
It was very nice time for me. >>It was a very nice time for me.
There are eight kids and eight adults. >>There were eight kids and eight adults.
We arrived Busan on December 31th. >>We arrived in Busan on December 31.
My family arrived Jeung been's house at first. >> My family arrived at Jung Bin's house first.
I just talked with Jeung been, because we did not see very long time. >>I just talked with Jung Bin because we didn't see each other for a very long time.
At first it was little awkward, but we started to talk about Gang dong won. >>It was a little awkward at first but aterwards we started talking about Gang Dong Won.
He is a very famous actor. and this is the same interest with her. >>He is a very famous actor. We share the same interests. |
